Bad essays are bad.

This seriously worries me.

Spoiler:

I need to stop sucking at english

lol~

practice makes perfect~ ^^)v


(tbh u wrote that a shit load better than i ever would've~

english isnt my forte~ =l

Your penmanship, spelling and grammar worries me.
But then again I'm an engineering student so good penmanship is kinda required and I'm far better at english than my own language. So much for patriotism.

I wrote that in 10 minutes
Whoever can fully read my handwriting gets brownie points

Is that troubles you much sun?

Yeah It's troubling
Last year it would be weird if I wouldn't get over 17
Even on a 10 minute essay
But this year
BAM I get a 15.

I think the 15 is mostly a grammar thing. After reading I can see more then a few common grammar mistakes. Your assumptions are mostly correct, So I see no real reason to dock points for those. Some simple stuff I could point out real quick, most of which is underlined in red;

fre quent is actually one word, frequent, no biggy, I've done that in french a few times myself.

Shakespeare's, forgot the apostrophe and s. x)

whenever you use a quote, "there is always a preceding comma"
and so; "The quote, "o' brave new world" appears multiple times. Each version of this quote however, implies a different feeling."

oh god stop me please, I can go on for days x.x gegege

FrogsnPie wrote:

I think the 15 is mostly a grammar thing. After reading I can see more then a few common grammar mistakes. Your assumptions are mostly correct, So I see no real reason to dock points for those. Some simple stuff I could point out real quick, most of which is underlined in red;

fre quent is actually one word, frequent, no biggy, I've done that in french a few times myself.

Shakespeare's, forgot the apostrophe and s. x)

whenever you use a quote, "there is always a preceding comma"
and so; "The quote, "o' brave new world" appears multiple times. Each version of this quote however, implies a different feeling."

oh god stop me please, I can go on for days x.x gegege

Frequent
I put it as one word
It's my handwriting