Wolf Kurayami
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 |  Subject: I make a roleplay... =-=  Fri Apr 29, 2011 4:48 am | |
| おとものあかいつきFeel free to look at it. :D Well, the point here is, I want to ask for any help like fixing the story and Idea to help it move. So any suggestion can be post here. :D | |
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FrogsnPie
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| | Subject: Re: I make a roleplay... =-= Mon May 02, 2011 4:09 pm | |
| Not a bad start there wolf, but I feel like you've given away too much information. Alas while interesting, it kind of feels like it's too rigid and can't be played out the way the public wants. That is, it feels like the beginning of a short story, not really a role-play.
Role-play is tough to establish =3 you can't give away too much, but you can't give so little it's a free for all. | |
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太陽 様
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| | Subject: Re: I make a roleplay... =-= Tue May 03, 2011 12:36 am | |
| Your title's wrong, lol
Otomo? I think not. | |
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Wolf Kurayami
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| | Subject: Re: I make a roleplay... =-= Sat May 07, 2011 7:07 am | |
| - FrogsnPie wrote:
- Not a bad start there wolf, but I feel like you've given away too much information. Alas while interesting, it kind of feels like it's too rigid and can't be played out the way the public wants. That is, it feels like the beginning of a short story, not really a role-play.
Role-play is tough to establish =3 you can't give away too much, but you can't give so little it's a free for all. Ah, I see it now. Thanks! :3 - 太陽 様 wrote:
- Your title's wrong, lol
Otomo? I think not. Ah, just notice that. Gonna fix it.. :P Thanks! | |
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